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Thursday, July 29, 2010

My friends Birthday party

Hi my name is Corilee and today is my friends birthday. I can't wait. First Emily and I are going back to my friends house to get ready to go to the Lido over in Palmerston North. We will probley be there for about 4 hours.Then we will be heading to Mc Donalds for tea YUMMY. It's going to be a massive day.

From Corilee
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Anonymous said...

Hi Corilee, your story is nice, I bet you had fun. But you could put some commas in it.

July 29, 2010 at 4:14 PM

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