Today i am going to my friends birthday party we are going to the movies to see Shrek Forever After and for diner we are going to Mc Donalds and then we are going home to play games and open up Alaynas presents.I have a feeling it will be a very great day.
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Hi, your story is cool and sounds fun. But maybe you should put some more commas in because your sentences are too long. Also you will be better if you had not use and so munch, you could maybe use then or a comma
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