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Wednesday, July 21, 2010

my dogs puppys

Hi my name is Brock and my story is about my puppy. I only have four now cause my mum took five to the s.p.c.a. My mum went to Australia because it will cost a lot of money for nine puppys so we keeped the four puppys we liked they were could flossy jake grunter fatty grunter has big as ears for a puppy my sister and me take jake for a walk around the block or to the dairy and when jaco comes to my house we walk flossy all the way to his house and we showed his mum and she said that puppy is cute and she said that puppy is to little to walk that far cause i live by the high school and jaco lives by Lytton street school and that is my story the end 

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I liked your story about your four adorable puppys Gunter sounds cute. you should make your puppys first letter a capitel and leave full stops. you take really good
care of your pups

from Samuel