today is thursday that means i have guides.Guides is for all the girls around feilding.We always do
fun activties like baking.Next weekend we will be going camping YAY!Today when i got to school my friend was giving water crystals out i got one.When i got to my class-(room 14) alot of children were surrounding me and my friend who also got one.
3 comments:
Hi Latisha
I really enjoyed reading your story. I use to go to Girl Guides when I was your age. The thing I enjoyed the most was wearing my uniform and selling the biscuits.
I think you could improve your story by making sure your using capital letters at the beginning of a sentence.
Keep up the great work
Mrs Armstrong-Lush
thanks Mrs Armstrong-lush for your
comment. Next time i will no to use
capital letters! bye
Hi Latisha,
I really liked reading your story.
One of the things I liked about your story was that you talk about guides alot, that could really get more people to join the guides it sounds fun. Some feed forword would be to put spaces in between your fullstops and use capital leters for your people, places and things.
yours sincerly Hannah.S
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