On Sunday the 27 of the 6 2010 i was walking down to the shop and on the way there i saw something green under a great big leaf i bent down and pulled the leaf away and i saw a twenty dollar note i was so excited because i already had fifteen dollars i my wallet.
5 comments:
Hi Carys
Wow! Weren't you lucky to find $20 on the ground I hope you spent it wisely and didn't buy lots of lollies.
I think to make your story better you need to put on some fullstops at the end of a sentence. I read your story and because you didn't have any full stops I ran out of breath.
Keep up the great work!
Mrs Armstrong-Lush
hi Carys i liked reading your story about the twenty doller note but you forgot the n on in you wallet
Hay carys cool story i enjoyed it because you told us alot of information.
from Alayna
hello carys man i wish that was me who found the $20 dollor note.Good story!
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