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Thursday, August 19, 2010
friday
on friday after hiphop
my mum and dad are going to a movie at 6:00 so i have to go to some one house i will not be staying there i will just be there into 8:00 or i might stay the night i have no idear i want to stay the night but it is up to my mum.THE END
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
Hi Kate,
Your story was interesting and fun to read. I would like to know what you did though to make it more interesting.
To help you with your writing just remember to use capital letters at the beginning of your sentence. You will need to check your spelling. You have spelt the word idea, "idear", so you need to correct this spelling error. Also Friday is a proper noun so it must have a capital letter.
1 comment:
Hi Kate,
Your story was interesting and fun to read. I would like to know what you did though to make it more interesting.
To help you with your writing just remember to use capital letters at the beginning of your sentence. You will need to check your spelling. You have spelt the word idea, "idear", so you need to correct this spelling error. Also Friday is a proper noun so it must have a capital letter.
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